Reviews For Love, Lily
Reviewer: Padfoot11333
Date: 07/03/14 8:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hi hello i'm sorry I didn't see this untill now!! This is so sweet and fluffy but also kind of heartbreaking at the end because you know that they'll not meet again. sigh.

I really enjoyed this and am sad I missed it until now. Thank you so much for writing it!!

Lily xoxo

Reviewer: ElmFeather
Date: 06/10/13 22:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hey there, stranger! ;) When I saw this at the top of the page, I just had to pop by and throw a 'hi' your way! Such a sweet little epistolary, I can't wait to read more!
- ElmFeather/Ms.Marauder/Bree
Geez I have a lot of names... xD

Author's Response: Hiyah Bree! glad you liked it! I already wrote the last chappie. Just need to get it betaed and put it up. -dmbw7052/Draco7052/Georgia I have lots of names also and those are just on this sight.

Reviewer: teh tarik
Date: 05/18/13 9:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hi there :) This is a lovely start. I really like the letter format of this story. You really showed Lily and James' frustration and sense of entrapment from the letters. These feelings just intensify as the letters go on, and I think you did a great job showing that.

I really loved that bit where baby Harry has his say :D Did he somehow use his infant fists to write those words out or is Lily simply being a scribe and writing down whatever he's gurgling about? At any rate, it was a moment that really made me smile.

This is a great start; I hope to read more soon :)

-teh

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it teh! I actually wasn't planning on continueing it, and had just forgotten to click the little completed button. but you have inspired me to continue it. so i'll try to write some more. I imagined that Lily would be just writing whatever Harry said. It was quite fun to come up with all those nonsense words. my sisters had problems trying to figure out what i was saying, since they dictated it to me while i typed. Anyway, i'm glad you liked it!

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