Reviewer: dmbw7052
Date: 08/05/13 15:57
Chapter: one-shot

Hey Ellie!

Once again, you amaze me with your writing talent. I love Loulily, and this story really brought out the best in them. You dealt very nicely with a sensitive topic and I think that it made the story even better. I also think that the way you handled a cousin pairing was admirable, as often times the fact that it's not that normal just gets pushed to the side.

Thanks so much for a wonderful read and keep writing!

-Georgia

Author's Response: I'm blushing, Georgia. I know it was a heavy topic, but I'm thrilled that you liked it. I always try to address the general controversy of a cousin pairing, and I'm glad you found that to be helpful towards the story. Thank you so much for the amazing review, my fellow snake!

Ellie

Reviewer: Ribe featherquill
Date: 08/04/13 10:51
Chapter: one-shot

Yet another story from you. Yes. This story is up to your normal high standard. I had a feeling that it would be about these two before I read, knowing the summary and your stories. I don't know why, but I had hoped it would be Lily's version of 'Tea and honey' by Marple. Not that I'm disappointed by this story. The only thing about this story is a couple of typos.
Thank you for this story on my birthday.

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much (as always) for the amazing review. Hah, yes it is about Louis and Lily, and I actually had 'Tea and Honey' in the back of my mind when I wrote this. Happy birthday, and I'll try to fix the typos!

Ellie

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