Reviewer: Kerowyn6
Date: 12/30/13 16:09
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Magical World

I like this a lot! It's nice that you made Tatiana black, that's something that irked me about HP: no black characters.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 11/12/13 13:52
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Magical World

It is too much like the original plot. Try to get some more varied stuff in here. Well written,

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! The next chapter is probably the last that will closely resemble the original plot, and after that the story will go in a different direction. In general, I'm keeping these things the same: the whole Horcruxes thing, and the leaving school to go hunt Horcruxes in year seven. Otherwise, I'll be sure to change it up!

Reviewer: majoko da witch
Date: 09/14/13 16:01
Chapter: Chapter 1: So Magic Really Does Exist

post more!

Reviewer: majoko da witch
Date: 09/14/13 15:02
Chapter: Chapter 1: So Magic Really Does Exist

best story ever! i

Author's Response: Thanks for the positive feedback. Is there anything specific you liked?

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 09/09/13 12:59
Chapter: Chapter 1: So Magic Really Does Exist

Interesting characterisation. I hope you can keep a fairly original story line and don't just repeat the books.

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