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Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/12/16 21:04 · For: Chapter 15
Darn it all! You need an Epilogue! Loved this story. Still wish Lucius hadn't died. I would have loved to see Narcissa's reaction. Like I said, an Epilogue would be nice. See you next time.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/12/16 20:39 · For: Chapter 14
Now that was uncalled for! You didn't have to kill Lucius off. I suspected who Ape was but I didn't think it was a disgruntled Gryffindor. I hope Hermione comes out ok. It will really hurt for Dennis to be arrested by Colin's hero.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/12/16 18:57 · For: Chapter 13
For a second I thought Baker was actually Bates. I can't figure out who Squid and Ape are to save my soul. And, there's only a couple of chapters left. I think Draco may be flooing Hermione. I wouldn't put it past Narcissa to use Hermione's address either:P

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/12/16 18:21 · For: Chapter 12
Wow--Narcissa's quite the Mama Bear protecting her cub. Well, I don't know if protecting is the right word--maybe advocating, inspiring, actively fighting for would be better choices. I think Narcissa's right. Hermione does care about Draco romantically. You know, I almost cried for him after Hermione left.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/12/16 15:29 · For: Chapter 11
I know Draco will miss the sound of the water. I had to smile and even chuckle when reading Narcissa's and Lucius' comments about Hermione. I'll probably smile for several hours. This is really important--that the Malfoys would be so accepting of Hermione, even considering her as a potential mother of their grandchildren. She is a war hero after all. They couldn't do much better.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/12/16 14:56 · For: Chapter 10
Oh my! Draco is a bad boy. He's actually going to Apparate to Malfoy Manor? With Hermione? I was wrong before. I like the romance but the action mixed in is lovely too. I can't wait to find out who Squid is. Back a couple of chapter ago, I found it believable that Lucius would collect orchids or attempt to collect them. I haven't done real well with orchids. Not that I can't raise them but they always come to some sort of harm. One that was blooming got knocked on the floor by a friend and broke. One that was budding was mistaken for a dried up dusty old thing and thrown out--not by me. I'm almost afraid to see them bud now. It's bad luck.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/12/16 13:59 · For: Chapter 9
That was great! So romantic! And then it stopped. Someone once told me that there wouldn't be a good story without conflict. I realize that but I hope we get back to the romance soon. Come to think of it, though, the conflict adds a lot. Draco's let her know how he feels. I think she'll come around.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/11/16 19:13 · For: Chapter 8
It's so hard to call someone by another name when you know them by a different name. I cringe every time Draco calls her Hermione. I really enjoy seeing Draco living as a Muggle, more or less. Maybe he's trying too hard to convince her he's a different person. He keeps making mistakes.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/11/16 16:35 · For: Chapter 7
I figured that was what the problem was with what Draco said. I thought it was a harmless statement but I guess I can see where Hermione's coming from also. I can't wait to see what Draco has planned.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/08/16 17:37 · For: Chapter 6
Interesting that Draco interpreted his mother's look to mean he should share his basket with Hermione. Or, maybe Draco is using that as a line to get Hermione to join him for dinner. I like it when these two get to the point when they start liking each other.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/08/16 15:29 · For: Chapter 5
Who would've thought that Ape would actually have a rolodex. Not just a rolodex but one that has useful information in it.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/07/16 16:50 · For: Chapter 4
Poor Draco. I'm a little surprised that Draco has taken some Muggle aspects into his life. He's really serious about keeping a low profile. He and Hermione could have a nice vacation if they'd both relax a little.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/06/16 18:23 · For: Chapter 3
It's always fun to hear Draco and Hermione argue. Each one is as bright as the other and they're likely to argue about anything.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/06/16 15:24 · For: Chapter 2
Draco's right. It's so much easier to deal with someone in your head. People aren't as polite and tolerant in real life. I hope the Malfoys are safe.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/06/16 14:41 · For: Chapter 1
Your formatting makes this story difficult to read. Other than that, I really liked this story Of course, I'm wondering who Squid and Ape are but that assumes they're regular characters. Maybe they're new characters. Time will tell.

Name: Chelle74 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/14 2:23 · For: Chapter 15
Beautiful end to a compelling story! Thank you for the journey, I really enjoyed that one. I hope to see more from you in the future!!

Author's Response: Ah, I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thank you so much for reading and leaving such great reviews on every chapter! I seem to have lost a bit of traction on this site as far as readers go, and I'm really happy that there are still people out there willing to give me a chance. :)

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 04/02/14 13:39 · For: Chapter 15
I enjoyed that very much. Excellent writing.

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Name: Lucius_Vorenus (Signed) · Date: 03/31/14 7:59 · For: Chapter 1
Very well written story.
This has been a great read.
Glad you've finished your story, as many great starts of stories never reach the finish.

Thank you very much!

With the HP fanfiction sort of fading out, stories like these keep the flame of Potterverse alive.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this!

Name: BookWorm530 (Signed) · Date: 03/30/14 16:11 · For: Chapter 15
I can't believe it is the end...what a great fic! Truly wishing for an epilogue but it was a sweet end none the less. Nicely done!

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Name: Chelle74 (Signed) · Date: 03/20/14 0:55 · For: Chapter 14
Bravo! I guessed correctly about "Ape's" true identity and I even had a sneaking suspicion that "Squid" was a Creevey. I kept second guessing myself on the latter because your character is SO un-Creevey in nature, but I really like how you show what anger and bitterness and a thirst for revenge can do to someone. Now to help Hermione stop the bad guys and finally let the romance happen!!

Author's Response: I figured people would catch on to Ape's true identity pretty easily, and I'm glad I kept you guessing with Squid's. Another reader pointed out that George Weasley could've gone much the same way after Fred's death, and I agree: the loss of a loved one changes you, sometimes for better, sometimes for worse. Colin's death hit Dennis hard and, well... You see the results. Thank you so much for reading!

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