I love that you used the metaphor of clay and molder. Stubborn clay seems to fit Harry's personality well. The personification makes the clay more relatable to Harry as well. Rebellious, courageous- those are words that really describe Harry. Great job. I also really like the flow of the poem, the shift between the two characters. It's like a battle. I really like it.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!! :) I thought stubborn clay fir him rather well, also. ~Nagini
Author's Response: Thank you!!!! :) I thought stubborn clay fit him rather well, also. ~Nagini