Reviews For Friends and Foes
Reviewer: desertsol98
Date: 04/09/14 12:52
Chapter: Belgravia Mews

Yay! Finally get to see how Bobbi Beadle got involved.

Great chapter, looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response:
Thanks, you'll be seeing more of Bobbie.
More Soon.
-N-

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 04/08/14 9:32
Chapter: Belgravia Mews

Great chapter1
Loved the interchange between the muggle police and the aurors.
Looking forward to the visit to Malfoy Manor.

Author's Response: Thanks.
Harry's team still need to practice, but they're getting better.
You will see Draco, but not for a while.
-N-

Reviewer: witch1561
Date: 04/05/14 22:33
Chapter: Belgravia Mews

So, this is our first meeting with Bobbie! Very interesting... I hope they catch Goyle and friends quickly.

Your story, as always, is fascinating and detailed. I love all the insights into police work - do you have experience there? Or is this very careful research?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review
The second meeting is coming soon, but don’t expect a rapid resolution regarding Goyle. That particular chapter is still some way away.
The police stuff was research, not experience.
-N-

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 03/27/14 14:06
Chapter: The Burrow (Mostly)

Great to see Angelina at the Burrow on her first visit.
Like the way the story is going, please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
It will be a while before you see Angelina again, but the next chapter will be up very soon.
-N-

Reviewer: Quidditch through the ages
Date: 03/17/14 20:27
Chapter: Prologue: A Surrey Start

I can't wait to read more! I love Daisy, and how you have kept the flower name theme for Evans/Dursley women, though JKR seems to relish them in general. (Lavender, Myrtle, Lily, Petunia, Pansy, etc.)

So, Millie-could her given name be Millicent?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Daisy will be back, but not for a few chapters. Instead you’ll be meeting another OC. I look on Lavender as having a colour name, because I called her mother Carmine, and her daughter violet, except that’s a flower too, isn’t it? As for Millie…
-N-

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina
Date: 03/10/14 15:24
Chapter: The Burrow (Mostly)

I really loved the George and Angelina parts. Just went back and read April Fool and Angelina again before rereading this chapter, just to remember how the story was progressing.

I also really, really like what you suggest of Percy and Audrey's relationship. I've surmised a lot from the little you say, and it amuses me greatly.

Looking forward to whatever comes next!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
This chapter is set two weeks after April Fool, and a week after Angelina (which I really must edit).
I know how, when, and where Percy and Audrey got together, but that’s another story, and it’s one I won’t start for a long time.
-N-

Reviewer: sejackson91
Date: 03/09/14 21:56
Chapter: To the North

Hmm... Millie Flynn huh? Sure that's not Millie Flint? I think I know where this is at some point going. Well done as usual.

Author's Response: Certain! Anyway, who is Millie Flint? :-D -N-

Reviewer: MoMagic
Date: 02/12/14 23:36
Chapter: To the North

Can't wait for Dudley's 20th!

Author's Response: Thanks.
There's a long way to go before you'll see Dudley's party.
-N-

Reviewer: fi103r
Date: 01/29/14 23:10
Chapter: To the North

Dudley grows up who would have imagined? It must have taken maximum restraint to avoiid asking Dudlley's 'witch' what house she was in at Hogwarts. Excellent, keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Dudley started growing up in OotP, I think. Harry just managed to stop Ginny from asking that very awkward question. -N-

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 01/29/14 19:07
Chapter: To the North

i just love how you've made dudders a bit better then he was but not completely different like in other stories

Author's Response: Thanks, he carries a lot of Vernon's genes, so I couldn't change him completely. -N-

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 01/29/14 12:34
Chapter: To the North

Like the way you have made Dudley believable. He has grown up and become much nicer but he isn't perfect.
Looking forward to the party and the "foes".

Author's Response: Thanks. Dudley has been molded by Vernon and I hope that some of his opinions reflect that.
Next, we visit The Burrow, then it's off to Belgravia.
-N-

Reviewer: Lady Aliena
Date: 01/28/14 23:12
Chapter: To the North

A witchcraft shop owned by Millie Flint and her husband...now why does that sound a bit suspicious?

I'm thoroughly enjoying all your stories. You've created wonderful cannon-compliant additions/extensions to the Potterverse.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
The surname is Flynn, not Flint, but I'll say no more.
I try to keep all of my stories canon-compliant, I hope I succeed.
-N-

Reviewer: AtarahPern
Date: 01/23/14 13:02
Chapter: Easter in Little Whinging

Really enjoying this and very much looking forward to the next installment! I had always hoped that Dudley turned into a decent guy. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Hopefully by now you will have discovered what Dudley has turned into.
-N-

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 01/22/14 15:16
Chapter: Easter in Little Whinging

That was so well observed.
Unhappy people can cause so much misery.
Ginny is such a great partner for Harry.
Loooking forward to seeing the new Dudley.

Author's Response: Thank you.
Vernon is simply filled with hate, and it isn’t doing him any good.
This is Ginny at her best, I think. As for Dudley…
-N-

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 01/20/14 19:07
Chapter: Easter in Little Whinging

This was very good. Interactions with the Dursleys - an apparent good time! Ha! I am looking forward to Harry's conversations with Dudley and how they make amends. I can certainly tell that Dudley has matured and has redeeming qualities.

- Katie

Author's Response: Thanks, Katie.
You’ll meet “my” Dudley in the next chapter. He’s twenty years old, and I’m sure he thinks he’s mature. But, how much has he changed?
-N-

Reviewer: fi103r
Date: 01/20/14 15:55
Chapter: Easter in Little Whinging

Excellent. Love the Ginny/Petunia mix can't wait to see this New Dudley. 'enjoy their Misery' consider that sooo stolen. It so well describes some folks I know. If they don't enjoy life why should anyone? Keep up the good work. Loved the 'flying motorbike is outside' that probably set a purple face rage record before the kiss started

Author's Response: Thank you. Ginny was very restrained, fortunately for Petunia. There are, unfortunately, people who have that attitude. It does no one any good. I enjoyed making the bike joke, and as for public displays of affection… -N-

Reviewer: Gazgoodfella
Date: 01/17/14 8:58
Chapter: Prologue: A Surrey Start

This is great, really looking forward to continuing this read! Can i ask what your currently working on, should i be checking this for updates or 'Strangers at drakesough'?

Iv read upto the 'Drakesough dragon' but dont want to read any further in case of spoilers.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You'll see the next chapter of this story very soon. As I said below, I'm also working on Aurors and Schoolgirls, Strangers at Drakeshaugh and James and Me. -N-

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 01/14/14 22:15
Chapter: Prologue: A Surrey Start

This was a pleasant surprise. While I was hoping your next update would be one for Aurors and Schoolgirls, this was also very enjoyable.

As always, I look forward to any updates of your stories. They always prove to be a good distraction from my studies. :)
- Katie

Author's Response: Thanks, Katie.
The first three chapters of this story have been (mostly) written for some time. I was hapoing to get a chapter of A&S up next, but it's taking me some time to get it ready. I'm also working on both Strangers at Drakeshaugh and James and Me.
-N-

Reviewer: desertsol98
Date: 01/13/14 13:02
Chapter: Prologue: A Surrey Start

A great start. I'm hooked already. I am looking forward to this story.

Author's Response: Thanks, this prologue is an experiment. 1000+ words, and no dialogue. -N-

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 01/13/14 3:59
Chapter: Prologue: A Surrey Start

Wonderful start to the story.
What will the Dursleys make of Ginny, she's soon sort them out!

Author's Response: Thank you.
What will Ginny make of the Dursleys? (a voice in the back of my mind is shouting "mincemeat").
-N-

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