Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/25/15 23:58
Chapter: Mark Five

That was great. I love it when writers take something from Muggle life and turn it into a magical object. This was a great adaptation of a smart phone.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/25/15 22:57
Chapter: Mark One

Maybe Ginny should join the design team. She certainly had a lot of good criticism. You made Ginny's home sound so beautiful. I wanted to go here. It sounded cool and relaxing.

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 08/28/14 12:41
Chapter: Mark Five

Great chapter, poor George, it's nice to know that he comes through in the end.
The interaction with the Fab Four is always spot on. Thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you.
Glad you liked the Harry/Ginny & Ron/Hermione banter.
-N-

Reviewer: foolondahill17
Date: 08/27/14 15:53
Chapter: Mark Five

I really enjoyed that. It was a fresh, interesting idea and your characterization was spot-on. I especially loved the sibling banter between George and Ginny.

Author's Response: Thank you. Ginny tells George what she thinks, and so she should. -N-

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 02/25/14 22:07
Chapter: Mark One

Great chapter! I'm sorry to hear about someone attempting to copy your work. That's really a shame.

In any regards, it's hard for me to remember times without Internet and cell phones and now they're everywhere. I like the parallels with the wizard technology. Of course, wizards would experience a similar technological revolution, albeit not in the same ways that Muggles did (are).

Again, a nice read and as always I am looking for to any of your updates. :)
- Katie

Author's Response: Thanks Katie
I was impressed by the speed with which ffn reacted, particularly as I hadn't actually complained myself. It seems that ten reviews accusing plagiarism weren't enough, and the author submitted a second chapter. The story vanished almost immediately, while I was asleep.
The Dursleys are a '90's family. They have a single telephone in the hallway. The communications revolution happened remarkably quickly, and I'm sure the advantages of instant communication would not be lost on Harry and his friends.
More soon.
-N-

Reviewer: trigg
Date: 02/23/14 5:16
Chapter: Mark One

Great story as always. I loved the dialog between Ginny and George, especially the part about message types and phone design. I'm looking forward for next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. The dialogue was fun to write. I feel rather sorry for George. -N-

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 02/22/14 6:14
Chapter: Mark One

Wonderful!!

And pooey on the copy cat! Boo! Your story, all of them are amazing!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-

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