*sniff* good writing.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. ~Carole
Beautiful - I loved the language used, the layout of the poem and the repitition of 'last time'.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I had a bit of a struggle sorting out the layout, so I'm happy it's appreciated. :D ~Carole
Um so this poem will be the death of me.
Author's Response: please don't die