Penname: NeverTooLate [Contact]
Real name: Alexi
Member Since: 10/07/08
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Hey, I'm Alexi, and I go to Scotts Valley Middle School. I would be what I call a "one shot wonder" because that's all I write. My style mostly revolves around the inspiration from true emotions and meaningful lyrics of songs. Most of my fics are inspired by songs from a band called The Fray, which is really all I listen to. I love to write dark, as you can see from my current fic. I tend to express the darker sides of love and life in a very powerful way. And really all I write in is second person POV because it's the easiest way to express the emotions and words I try to portray.
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Born the Day You Kissed Me by CLee
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1262]

Summary: I was born the day you kissed me...I died inside the night you left me...But oh how I lived while you loved me. . . .


The sequel Agapanthus is up!

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 71595 Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/07/04 Updated: 02/27/06


Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/30/09 Title: Chapter 24: Black

DO NOT MAKE ME KILL YOU!!!!!

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/30/09 Title: Chapter 24: Black

DO NOT MAKE ME KILL YOU!!!!! I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU WOULD DO THAT!!!!! Sorry. As you can probably tell, I am very pissed. And you may also see that I have left 24 comments precisely. I loved the rest of the story and I hope it rekindles!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for all of your reviews, they mean a lot to me!

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 1: Home for the Holidays

Good. I like the writing and I can't wait to read more!

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 2: Loss of Memory

Awesome! Even better than the first chapter! You're good at building a story that can keep someone up at 12:17 a.m. on a Saturday night!!

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 3: Strange Noises

The title is the thing that hooked me actually. I like the story alot and I found a song that describes the first few chapters...

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 4: Journey to the West Wing

You are an awesome writer......I could have a fic writing contest with you...that would be fun as hell!

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 5: Saved

Getting much better. I noticed your writing gets better as the romance comes in more. That's where your talent truly shines. Such a surprising pairing. I still love it though!

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 6: The Foreshadow

Yep, certainly hanging. I really should stop reading this. It's like an addiction. I want to finish the fanfic......I have to!

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 7: Live Bait

OMG! I am madly in love with this fanfic. I cannot stop reading it! Help me rehab!

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 8: Falling

YES!!!! I was waiting for something like that to happen. Very, very, very well written. I love this chapter!!!
You've kept me going for eight chapters and I'm not going to stop now!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 9: The Unpleasant Surprise

I love how you continue to emphasize that both are falling for each other but the relationship seems a little bit too lustic.

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 10: Hermione's Tears

Awwwwww! Short but sweet. Still can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 11: The Gift

Your writing was a bit shaky in the beginning but when you began to fill out the story a bit, your writing just came...alive

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 12: Truth Be Told

Definitely addicted. This fanfic is probably the best I've read on this site.

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 13: Snow Fights And Fevers

So cute! This is the farthest I've ever read into a fanfic. You'd better feel special. Normally I'll read one-shots just because I'm bored.

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 14: The Restricted Section

A bit longer than the other chapters but I held onto every moment of it! I find myself addicted to reading the intimate scenes because they are just so well written!

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 15: Dear Draco

I'm really impressed. I didn't like the way the relationship unfolded at first but the way you describe feelings and *ahem* scenes have me hooked!!!!!

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 16: Dreams, Schemes and Holiday Themes

I forgot to comment on this for the last chapter but it can also apply to this one too. I love Pansy's feelings toward the realtionship and how sneaky she's being about it. Too me it just seems so....Pansy.

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 17: The Gown

Out of the 16 chapters I've read, this one is the best. I've never stuck so closely to a fanfic before.

 
Reviewer: NeverTooLate Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 18: A Day of Love, A Look of Loathing

Addicted...

 
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