Summary: [WIP] Post-HBP. Eleven years after the end of the war, Hermione finds herself in a delicate situation when her only son leaves for Hogwarts and threatens her most guarded secret: that he’s not only a Granger, but also a Snape! SS/HG.
Your Nathan is so good! Characterization is just perfect, we can see the Granger and the Snape in him (he's a bit over-brave, though, as a result, isn't he?).
Besides, everything is surprisingly plausible. I'm wondering how Nathan happened to exist at all. I sense it's going to be something dark... Can't stop reading :)
Summary: The Dursleys have left Privet Drive and are in hiding with Hestia Jones and Dedalus Diggle. Hestia and Mr. Dursley are constantly fighting, Petunia is avoiding the wizards at all costs, and Dedalus is trying to make them all the best of friends. Meanwhile, Dudley discovers he has an interest in Harry's world, but his parents are less than pleased when they find out.
I love Dudley using Skiving Snackbox for the good side! :D
His fears? Flying...his own wand...fitting in...sticking out! His best friends? A passionate fire-breathing cousin, and a cool, aloof Death Eater's son. His destiny? Anything but ordinary!
Join Albus as he experiances his first year at Hogwarts and begins the journey out from under his father's collosal shadow, if he can survive it of course!
Meet the new Tenacious Trio, Albus Potter, Scorpius Malfoy, and Rose Weasley
Yeah, you're back! I love this story, hope you'll be able to update soon :)
Thanks I will do my best...after the last chapter ordeal...no promises though.
Summary: Albus Severus Potter is in danger. He's writing in his journal. No, he's not in danger because he's writing in his journal. He's in danger so he is writing in his journal so, just in case he dies, there will be proof of his first year at Hogwarts. You know those times when you're about to die so you're entire life flashes before your eyes? Well, Al is having one of those moments, and he's writing it down. Join me and read what Al has written in his final hour (or so) and learn what exactly happened during his first year at Hogwarts to endanger his life.
I like this story ! (but I have access only to one chapter, too: chaper 2 is still chapter 1 again!)
Hope it will be fixed soon and I will read an review chapter 2, can't wait to know why Albus is writing :)
I just found a bit weird that Albus refers to his father as 'Harry', instead of 'Dad' at the beginning.
It was like a wizard tale. The clever Slytherin helps a hag who later repays the debt. Except that Rose Weasley wasn't a hag, and Scorpius didn't expect to call in the favour.
*Winner of the 2010 Next Generation QSQ award*
Some more things I love after chapter 6:
- Lily and her pavartish style
- Orbs, I always found suspiscious that wizards had only one band. I mean, some of them were bound to have bad taste in music... Think of Lavender's collection of orbs! *dread*
- Characters are ever more and more subtle. Scorpius is even getting kind of cute with his last reply.
- This kiss was hot!
Looking forward to read more :)
Author's Response: I love you for telling me the things you loved! *hugs*
I love your Scorpius Malfoy all in shades of grey. This is a very subtle characterization, I'll read on :)
Charcoal grey, rain, cloud, smoke, slate...all shades complement his personality (and his looks)! ^_~
I still love this story. Looking forward to read more! Oh, and I loved hearing Hugo Weasley saying to Malfoy the exact same words Draco had used on Harry; that was brilliant!
Author's Response: What goes around, comes around, right? :D Like before, the words don't hurt. Scorpius knows he's wanted at home...and wishes he wasn't, lol.
Summary: A vanishing cabinet... an enchanted necklace... the Chamber of Secrets... and one very young, very dangerous, and ever so handsome Dark Lord. Hermione tries hard to send herself, Harry and Ron back to their own time, but Tom Riddle has other plans.
An original Hermione/Tom Riddle romance with a refreshing touch of adventure.
I like that! You really have the knack to make it all sound very plausible! I'll go on reading :)
Author's Response: Thanks! After reading so many fics where the trio go back by accidentally being hit by a curse or Dumbledore sending Hermione back to save Tom Riddle by making him fall in love, I've come to realise how important it is to make sure the story is actually plausible! That's why I took extra time to make sure the story works and doesn't just follow old cliches... I'm glad you picked up on that.
Summary: Ginny stands with her family, looking at her brother Fred...dead. She knows that some things have just changed completely.
I like your peom for its musical quality. I can hear the music :) These are very good lyrics, you should put them in music or ask a friend to do so if you are not musician :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I actually am a musician, and the poems I post on this site are songs that I have written, and then adapted to fit the HP canon. It means a lot to me that you noticed this particular thing, as it sort of means that I'm doing a good job as both a poet and a musician. Thanks again!
Summary: It started with a quote.
A great man’s greatest good luck is to die at the right time
- Eric Hoffer
And Tom Riddle just couldn't forget it. Eventually, he is driven to seek out Hoffer and put his mind at peace. Tom pushes past boundries never crossed before, never even imagined before. Because after all, how could anyone consider it good luck to die?
I like the style of this chapter very much. It is very well written. I'll look out for chapter two!
Author's Response: Thankks <3 I'm glad you liked it. :]
Summary: Dandelion Dursley is heartbroken to leave her mother and beloved grandfather, Dudley, to start her first year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Little does she know that she will blossom in her training as a witch, discovering that she has a highly rare magical talent. She will also befriend The Forgotten Ones: Lily Luna Potter, Albus Severus Potter, and Hugo Weasley.
Thanks for updating! This story is really cute and I'm looking forward to read ahead :)
Author's Response: I started writing the next chapter today, so hopefully you'll be able to read it soon.
Nice start! It's a bit abrupt in many ways, but it's catchy and well written. Looking forward for more :)
Author's Response: I'll try to make the rest of the story less abrupt. I'm glad I've caught your attention, at least. Thank you for the review.
Summary: After a year playing Quidditch for the Harpix’s, Ginny finds herself whisked off to Italy for a summer holiday by none other than dear Aunt Muriel. Although Ginny might welcome a holiday, Muriel is not the best of traveling companions. And when one Draco Malfoy comes rather literally tumbling into the scene, will this prove to be the nightmare holiday Ginny envisions, or something else entirely?
Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill for Best Romance-Non Canon
"I’m a hundred and ten, Ginny. Do you have any idea how many names I’ve learnt in my days?"
haha, love it :) My favorite Muriel quote far now.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like Muriel's remarks. I sure love writing her - it lets me write all those rude things nobody really says out loud - except Muriel, of course. :)
Sweet story :) I like the austenian touch and your aunt Muriel is just fine! I'll keep reading.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like the rest of it, too. I’m glad you like Muriel – I find it fun to write her. As for any austenian touch: I’m deeply flattered - she’s one of my favourite authors. :)
Summary: When an eleven-year old girl starts making strange things happen she goes to the only person she can think of...Hermione Granger.
I am ginnygirl16 of Slytherin and this is my final for the Being British class
This is cute :) and very well written.
Author's Response: Thankyou! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) ~ginnygirl16~
Summary: Jemzi Zabini is the seventeen year old daughter of Blaise Zabini and his wife Harper, and is about to join her fellow witches and wizards at Hogwarts for their final school year. Jemzi is famous for being the once best friend of Albus Potter. However, a mysterious argument last year that only the two of them were witness to has ruined their friendship and they are now practically enemies. No one knows the reason for their fall out, only that it has caused a great divide in their friendship group.
Jemzi's best friend and Albus' cousin, Rose, suspects that their friendship expired because of strange and unwanted feelings between them. Feelings which, despite their fall out, have not gone away. Feelings that are similar to those she has for a certain Slytherin...
So can the next generation of Hogwarts students learn to forget past actions and forgive?
Nominated for "Best Next Generation Story" and "Best Other Character" in the 2010 Quicksilver Quill Awards
This story features Harry Potter, Ginny Potter, Lily Potter, Luka Krum, Blaise Zabini, Harper Zabini, Zacharias Smith, Leon Holmwood, Tristan Wells, Rose Weasley, Scorpius Malfoy, Jemzi and Albus plus many more.
Oh... This is great. Just one word, then: update! ;)
Author's Response: Will do, next chapter's coming soon :D
Summary: Draco has never heard of Astoria Greengrass. Nor has anyone else for that matter.
They meet one night at her sister's engagement party and while she may be troubled and detached, Draco quickly finds himself worryingly obsessed. But Astoria has a secret, one that the Greengrass family have kept buried since her childhood and one that she is ever-desperate to escape.
I like this story! So far the best approach to Draco-Astoria story I've read.
Looking forward to read on!
Summary: Nolan Greco (OC) stepped on a tooth. That's right, a tooth. That's the reason he moved to Scotland, the reason he's going to Hogwarts, and the reason he's a Werewolf. The new professor is supposedly going to make this year easier for him - being around another of his kind and all - but with a bad first impression, Nolan isn't so sure.
well written, promising story :) I'll be looking for the next chapter.
Author's Response: :) Thanks. I'm still trying to figure out how to upload chapters on here.
Summary: Hermione Granger is in a dilemma. A dilemma she never thought could happen. Least of all to her. During the battle of the Department of Mysteries in the trioâ€™s fifth year, Hermione discovers something else in the Hall of Prophecy. Something involving her. For two years, Hermione kept what she discovered a secret, only confiding in her cat, Crookshanks. After extensive research and several well-thought out plans, Hermione came to the conclusion that there was only one thing she could do to ensure that the prophecy she discovered when she was fifteen would never come true. She had to run. Leave everything and everyone she had ever cared about behind. It was the only way to keep them all safe. Especially him. Five years after leaving her life behind, Hermione returns to England, in a disguise, of course.
In a final attempt at bravery, a stolen kiss and the sacrifice of taking a deadly curse to end it all, Hermione reveals herself, and so does her murderer.
This in an AU story about Hermione Granger and all her secrets.
Oh no, such an ominous ending to this second chapter! Looking forward to read more, I'm intrigued by your story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it and I appreciate the feedback. I honestly didn't even know the second chapter was validated. I never got my confirmation email. :) I'm glad it's up and I'll have Chapter 3 out soon.