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Never Ever by Black-Sand
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Never and ever are two simple words sometimes overlooked, but putting them together means something permanent. Never ever is a phrase that shouldn’t be said unless you mean it. The question is: does George mean it enough to never ever stop from following it through?

George/OC

Thank you, AlexPotter, for being my beta.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 8190 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/09/09 Updated: 09/20/09


Reviewer: Illiria Signed
Date: 08/06/09 Title: Chapter 4: This Pain

I am loving this story! And not just because I'm a huge George fan :) I really like the way you have written him, and the depth you've given Dawn. I really like how persistant he is and that she doesn't react so you don't get the antagonistic relationship most love/hate stories have ( in other words I like the way she treats him so as not to show she likes him)

Ok I make no sense. But I like your fic :)

Ria.

Author's Response: G'day Ahh, another George fan! He's the best. I have two George stories. Thank you for the review, I'm glad another fan likes my characterisation of him and of Dawn. I never really liked the love/hate relationship when it's chlique so I decided to make a different relationship. The next one will be in the queue soon. ...xXxLove SandyxXx...

 

I Never... by Russia Snow
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: It was only a kiss, how did it end up like this? It was only a kiss… It was only a kiss…

Draco Malfoy has been released from Azkaban. He is free to start a fresh. The only problem is, he doesn’t want a new start, he still wants one thing from his old life. He wants that one thing more than anything in the entire world. But she does not want him back. And he cannot accept that.

Nominated for 2009 QSQ's in " Best Dark/Angst"

Songfic: Mr Brightside by The Killers

Dedicated to an amazing beta, and awesome friend, Gabby. BeautyInTheBreakdown. Thankyou so much :)

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 2496 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/08/09 Updated: 07/09/09


Reviewer: Illiria Signed
Date: 07/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: I Never...

WOOOO!!!! Thanks for the PM, I came via the TWS though. Loved it, it really captures the emotion of the song, which you know I love. You created some very moving moments to fit the song and when Draco removed her memory I was so sad! The ending about tore me up inside, I really didn't see that coming. Extremely well done and definately lived up to my high expectations, :D. x

Author's Response: Awwww thanks Ria! I am glad you thought it captured the emotions and about the ending, I know, I hardly saw it coming myself until I had written it.... :-p I am happy that you had high expectations, and even happier that my story lived up to them! Russia xxxxx

 

Torn by Russia Snow
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: Jenna Lloyd is a normal Muggle; she has a normal name, and lives a normal life. Who would have thought that a shower of rain, a mysterious antique shop and a beautiful locket, would change her life forever?

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 2361 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
08/03/09 Updated: 08/06/09


Reviewer: Illiria Signed
Date: 08/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Locket

oooooo mysteries and intrigue running wild here! Very nice, can't wait to read the rest!

Ria x

Author's Response: Ria! You have no idea how awesome it is to get 4 reveiws in the first night of a fic being up! Thankyou so much! I promise another chapter shall be along shortly! Russia xxxxx (Loves this getting reveiws thing!)

 

Not Like This by Russia Snow
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: Someone has been murdered. The blame is being spread across the MLE squad and the prime suspect is one of their most prized officers. But who was really the culprit?

This is Russia Snow of Gryffindor submitting for “Breakfast at Stefania’s” Bookbasilisk Summer challenge.


Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 3278 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/24/09 Updated: 08/26/09


Reviewer: Illiria Signed
Date: 08/26/09 Title: Chapter 1: Breakfast at Stefania's

Nicely ended! I really enjoyed this, you write your characters well and the murder and framing was well planned out. I liked the amount of detail you used when descriding the prosscess of finding and using evidence. I really did love the end! I think you should have a go at writting a longer murder mystery, maybe chaptered as it would allow you chance to employ more supsense and Winston Smith seems like he could cover up several murders. Very well written hun, good luck.
Ria xx

Author's Response: Yeah, I was going to make this chaptered, but I Fail at time keeping and I told myself (Up until 2 weeks before the challenge ended,) that I wasn't going to enter... then I failed and had to whip this up mega fast because the bunny wouldnt leave me alone! I do love describing things! Soe can draw.. some can describe... And the people who can do both are just unfairly talented. lol Thankyou for the review! Russia xxxxx

Author's Response: Yeah, I was going to make this chaptered, but I Fail at time keeping and I told myself (Up until 2 weeks before the challenge ended,) that I wasn't going to enter... then I failed and had to whip this up mega fast because the bunny wouldnt leave me alone! I do love describing things! Soe can draw.. some can describe... And the people who can do both are just unfairly talented. lol Thankyou for the review! Russia xxxxx

 

To Tell The Truth. by Russia Snow
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: One mistake, one wrong number, can lead to lives torn apart. Secrets never solve anything, they only make things worse.Self harm warning for eating disorders.

This is Russia Snow of Gryffindor submitting for “One Flew Over the Fwooper's Nest” Bookbasilisk Summer challenge.


Categories: One Flew Over the Fwooper's Nest Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Self Injury, Violence

Word count: 3236 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/24/09 Updated: 08/26/09


Reviewer: Illiria Signed
Date: 08/26/09 Title: Chapter 1: To Tell The Truth

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Loved it! You did a very good job of showing how her month of no food and little sleep affected her body, I was very impressed. I loved the last few lines as well, I hated that he died but the fact that he told her he loved her first was so sweet. Great story again.
Ria X

Author's Response: Thanks Ria! *hugs* To be honest, I really hate this fic >.< It was just so short and... eugh. I am so so so happy that someone liked it! I love sweet endings you see! =D Russia xxxxx

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