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I am:

- between the ages of 0 and 21.
- an American
- a girl
- married to Teddy Lupin
- afraid of commas

I am not:

- JK Rowling
- tired of Harry Potter
- a moose (or any other forest animal)
- divorcing any time soon

Check out my stories - if you dare :).


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Deceptions by Equinox Chick
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: Beautiful and headstrong, with Veela blood running through her veins, Fleur Delacour understands the importance of looks, but as she seeks to ensnare the intriguing young Auror standing guard at Hogwarts, she forgets the most important truth of all: appearances are often deceptive.

This is Equinox Chick and this is my first entry into the Great Hall 2013 Cotillion (yes, I did say first!)

Disclaimer; I am not JK Rowling. I'm also not very good at French.

Thank you Sophie (the owl) for fabulous beta job, and Natalie (hestiajones) for giving me some pointers.

Categories: Femmeslash Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 15308 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/13/13 Updated: 02/11/13


Reviewer: lucca4 Signed
Date: 01/13/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Peaches

Ooh, I'm intrigued! I think the fact that this is set during the Triwizard Tournament, and not post-DH, makes the pairing all the more fun, namely because of the gift that Tonks gives her at the end. I loved the interactions between Fleur and "Edwin" - ha ha - and the way you write Tonks is such the best (perhaps it's because you are Tonks…hmm).

I can't wait for Chapter 2 :)

xx Ariana

Author's Response: Thank youuuuuuu! I decided to set it at the Tri-Wizard because I think there's a lot more wriggle room with her characterisation and also Tonks's. They're not with their respective spouses at this point, so it's easier to write something with no guilt attached :)

Really appreciate the review - thanks again ~Carole~

 
Reviewer: lucca4 Signed
Date: 02/11/13 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 -Flesh and Bone

I guess I missed the last time this was updated, because I was pleasantly surprised to find not one but two chapters for me to read - yay!

I loved this chapter. Contrasted with Roger's awkward kissing, it's easy to see why Fleur is so attracted to Tonks - and the heat between them is far more tangible than it is between Fleur and Roger. I absolutely adore the scene at the Yule Ball, the ending scene, especially when Tonks and Fleur run into Snape - hahaha, that made me smile. This is all written so beautifully -- Tonks's question about tomorrow really highlighted (for me, knowing this story probably won't defy canon) how ephemeral their relationship is doomed to be.

Off to read the next chapter now - this is brilliant :).

xx Ariana

Author's Response: Thank youuuuuuuuu. Glad you enjoyed this chapter because this was the point where I was wondering what the heck I'd started - ha ha. I did like writing the Snape bit and poor old Roger who I'm really not very nice to - ever. Sigh, perhaps I need to write him a story. Hmmmmmmm.

Thank you again for the lovely reviews and all your support. It is much appreciated. ~Carole~

 
Reviewer: lucca4 Signed
Date: 02/11/13 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Distractions

Wow. You have officially converted me to Flonks. They are an extremely hot couple, and the smut scenes between them were gorgeously written :).

What I loved most about this chapter was the realization of how similar Tonks and Fleur are -- both strong, independent women, who both blame themselves for circumstances out of their control. Because of this, it's so easy to see that despite their relationship not quite lasting, they still care about one another and can maintain a friendship in the coming years of the war. So even though part of me wanted you to add an AU warning to this story and have the two of them run off to Calais and get married, in the end their inevitable parting left me complacent. I love how you have Bill meeting Fleur at the end of the Third Task, and since we see later how happy Fleur is with Bill it makes everything more sweet than bitter.

I love this story, and I know it's going to do fabulously in the Cotillion. I would ask for a follow-up, but I'm not that greedy, so I'll just plant the idea in your mind somehow… :)

xx Ariana

Author's Response: Thank you so very much - especially the comment on the smut because I very nearly left that out. I had such problems trying to make this work because at the back of my mind I love Bill/Fleur and Remus/Tonks, so I knew it wasn't going to be AU. Anyway, I had to add a little smut because otherwise the chemistry just didn't seem to be there :( . Hmm, maybe they could run off to Calais and then the other marriages will be bigamous - heh heh. God, Molly would have several merry fits if that were true.

Hmmm, follow up. Perhaps that's my AU tha i one day need to write. Thank youuuuuuu ~Carole~

 

The Walnut Tree by Equinox Chick
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 34]

Summary: When Charity Burbage became the Muggle Studies professor, she was looking for a new life, safe in the enclave of Hogwarts.

She certainly wasn't looking for love.

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling.

This is Equinox Chick of Hufflepuff writing for the Second Great Hall Cotillion.

Thank you, Natalie, (hestiajones) for an on the hoof beta job.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Student/Teacher Romance, Violence

Word count: 23788 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/26/13 Updated: 02/26/13


Reviewer: lucca4 Signed
Date: 01/26/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ Proverbs

I really like this so far! I meant to open this in a window read a little bit later, because we were about to start dinner, but the first paragraph caught my eye and then I couldn't stop reading. I've never really considered Oliver a character I had to read about, but you've already made me fall slightly in love with him in this chapter. I'm also ready to kill Dorinda and Marcus, and I'm slightly in awe of you - how you've made me feel so strongly about characters in just one chapter.

I'm excited to read the next part of this, I'll try to be patient :).

xx Ariana

Author's Response: I hope your dinner didn;t get cold! Thank you so much for the review, and I'm really pleased that the first paragraph intrigued you enough to read on because I was setting it up to sound like a scary DE scene when really it was her first day of teaching - ha! Dorinda and Marcus are gits, but maybe not irredeemable. :) ~Carole~

 
Reviewer: lucca4 Signed
Date: 02/08/13 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Laws

Ah, this chapter was well-worth the wait! You actually have me feeling sorry for Dorinda, when she was one of the characters I disliked the most in the first chapter. I love seeing the beginnings of Charity and Oliver's relationship, the little hints…you've painted characters who I really want to be together :).

Fantastic! This next wait will be even harder. xx Ariana

Author's Response: Actually, you won;t have to wait long as it's nearly set to go, I just need to tweak a little.

Thank you so much for the review, Ariana, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

 
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