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I am a teacher, musician, reader, and Harry Potter fan. I am a proud member of RAVENCLAW House and enjoyed being a site moderator for a time as well. While I am no longer active in the fandom, I am proud to have passed on my love of Harry Potter to my daughter!

I hope you enjoy the many stories and poems I have written. I am proud of them all and appreciate any feedback you might care to leave (in other words, reviews are love, even years later!) Thanks for reading!

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Be Wary, How Scary: Fourteenth February by wicked angel

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Perhaps the reason Snape really does detest Valentine's Day...

For my fellow 'Claws!
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 02/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful job! I feel so bad for Snape now. This certainly seems possible, and it was very sad for him to have his first love shattered like that. Nice job writing his character. The end in particular wrapped it all up very well. Thank you so much for participating in our little Valentine challenge for the potions master! *turnip hug* ~Gina :)

Author's Response: *turnip hug* right back at ya, Gina! thanks for the great review, and apologies again for not having it turned in on time for V-Day...glad you liked it tho!

Annabelle by Dill

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: When Professor Lockhart suggests that the students ask Professor Snape about Love Potions, the bitter Potions master is plunged into a cyclone of memories and the agony of his first and only love, Annabelle.

Dedicated to my wonderful Ravenclaws.

The sequel in Annabelle's perspective is currently in the works.
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 02/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: Annabelle

Oh my, that is so sad! Poor Snape! There is more to this story, isn't there? Who is this girl, and why did she not only reject Snape but reject the whole idea of love? For a moment I was worried Snape's potion was going to kill her! I'm so glad that didn't happen. This was very bittersweet just as it was. I think you did a great job writing this sad story. Your language in particular really conveyed the tragic feelings of rejection and loss that Snape felt. Wonderful job! Thank you so much for participating in the challenge!! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Well, if you want there to be more to the story... I might be tempted to write another one-shot on Annabelle and from her point of view. =]

One White Pawn by Ravensgryff

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Ron Weasley has started having some very odd dreams. What do they mean? More importantly, can they help the trio to finally defeat Lord Voldemort? A Ron-centric fic written for HP Quills for a Cause.

Dedicated to my husband who always helps me see the big picture.
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 03/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Opening Game

Hi there!
What an interesting start! I actually bought "Through the Looking Glass" rather randomly last month, I shall have to look at it to see how your story relates. I love the focus on Ron. He will obviously have a big role to play in the final book, and it is nice to read about it from his point of view. The parallels to chess are also fascinating. The scene with the twins was heartbreaking, I feel so bad for Fred! Lovely job, I'm looking forward to reading the next part.
~Gina :)

Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 03/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: End Game

Wonderful job! I can't believe what happened to Pig. And then to use Ginny as bait, except with a twist - great idea. Poor Ginny! What an ending - I'd say more but I have to know what happens next! ~Gina :)

Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 03/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Epilogue

Whew! I'm so glad Ron is okay! =)
I loved the bit in the last chapter with Percy showing up. So Percy was the White Knight, and Ron was the one white pawn? Or was Peter a piece as well? Either way, the chess analogies were great. You did a wonderful job with Ron's character. Now - what happened to Harry?? =)
Great job, I'm glad I finally read this story! ~Gina :)

Growth by Madame Marauder

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily Evans has known James Potter for nearly seven years and she has seen him change from a little boy to a slightly bigger, more arrogant boy. But one night, beneath the Whomping Willow, she sees him mature into a man.
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 02/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

That was a nice read! You did a good job showing this other side of James's character, and how Lily might react to it. The last paragraph in particular really wrapped it up well. Good job, I'm glad I stopped to read this story! ~Gina :)

Comfort Me by joybelle423

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: HBP missing moment. While Harry was off talking with Scrimgeour after Dumbledore's funeral, what were Ron and Hermione doing?
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 02/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: Comfort Me

Wonderful job, Abigail! That was so sweet. I love missing moments and I could absolutely see this happening at the end of HBP. You did a fantastic job with Ron's character in particular. You captured both their banter and hesitation, and their kiss was lovely. Great job, I'm glad I stopped to read this cute story! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Gina! Thank you so much! I had so much trouble with the kissing part ... And I was worried about them being in character too. Thanks for the affirmation! *hugs*

A Hand in the Wolf's Mouth by ProfPosky

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: While out purchasing potions equipment, Severus Snape runs into a mysterious stranger who tells him the story of Tyr and the wolf. Will it fall on deaf ears, or will Severus listen and hear the words intended to guide him? Rated 3rd-5th years for very mild language.

This is an entry by ProfPosky for Gryffindor House in the New Year's Challenges, challenge three, Myth and Magic.
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 03/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful job! This was a great connection in mythology to make to Snape. It was well-planned and very thoughtful; it makes the reader think a bit, doesn't it? I'm still trying to puzzle out the layers. ;) You did a great job with Snape's character, and wrapped it up very nicely with the short scene with Dumbledore at the end. Congratulations on winning, it was well-deserved! ~Gina :)

Harry's Letters by mgle_teacher

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Voldemort is gone, and so is Harry Potter. Ron is having a hard grieving the death of his best friend, and is wallowing in self pity. Hermione is struggling with the grieving process herself, until she finds Harry's letters.

Important note: After reading Deathly Hallows, this story is officially 'on hiatus' until further notice. Thanks to everyone who read it while I was working on it.

Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Two Grieving Gryffindors and a Discovery

I can't believe I didn't review this already *headdesk* Sorry, dear! But of course you know what I think, since I had the privlege of beta-ing it! I think it is a wonderful start to a very touching story. You've done a great job setting up the scenario in which Ron and Hermione read these letters, and both are very in character. I feel bad for Ron in particular (what is it with you and Ron now? ;)) So now that the next part is up, I am off to read! Good luck! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Lol. You don\'t have review all of my stories, Gina. Goodness knows that I haven\'t reviewed all of yours >.> I really don\'t know what it is with me and Ron. I think he\'s just grown sweet on me. Lol. Technically, I blame you and Abigail for converting into a Ron supporter *cough* ~Ritta

Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: 31 June 1992

Aw, Harry's second letter was absolutely heartbreaking! I did not expect Ron to leave, I feel bad for Hermione now. I hope he comes back soon so Hermione will share the letters with him and we can read more. This was such a good plot bunny, I'm almost wishing I had adopted him myself! Great job and good luck as you continue (I know you are working on lots =))
~Gina :)

Author's Response: Was it? Aww! I\'m so happy now. I can write \'angst\' Yeah, I didn\'t have Ron leaving originally, but it just seemed appropriate. Lol...I\'m glad I adopted \"Flangst\" here if you think he\'s a good plot bunny. =] ~Ritta

He Just Doesn't Fancy You by mgle_teacher

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: It has been six years since Voldemort died at the hands of Harry Potter. The Wizarding world has moved on, and flourished. However, in the deep of London, one young man struggles to seduce his friend of five years as she remains inept and in the dark regardless of the subtle ways he tries to win her heart.
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 03/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: A torch carrying Slytherin, and a thick-headed Gryffindor

Ritta! Every story you write keeps getting better! I'm SO glad you finally wrote a Dramione story! =) You did a great job setting things up, with the short series of scenes between Draco and Hermione. As usual, you capture their banter wonderfully well. At the same time, you've given them both unique character and made it believable that they would fall for each other. I'm looking forward to reading the second part!!
And then you might have to tell us how Pansy Parkinson ended up a Weasley!! ;)
Great work,
~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Gina! *squishes*
You know I love alternating POV\'s (definitely my style) and I was worried that it wouldn\'t flow or seem sort of chopped up, but I\'m glad it worked nicely. I\'m also happy you pointed out their playful banter. Thanks!
As for Pansy with a Weasley....*trails off*

How This Bell Tolls by wendelin the wierd

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: What would you do if the world came crashing down on you? What would you do if someone you cared about so much, hurt you so deeply?
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 06/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: How This Bell Tolls

Hi Wendelin!
I wanted to read another one of your poems and thought this was a great title. It was also a good poem! I really liked the rhyme scheme you used, with two lines rhyming and a third that sort of concluded each stanza. It flowed very well. I also liked how the poem told a story, as sad as it was. You could really feel the bitterness of this piece. Great job! Thanks for my lovely banner, and CONGRATS on making the top ten list!
~Gina :)
PS. What couple did you have in mind when you were writing this piece??

Lupin's Sonnet by Cwiddy

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is a look at Remus Lupin's life from the werewolf bite, to his friends and finally to a bit of romance.

This is for the Sonnet Challenge in the forums from Cwiddy in Hufflepuff House.
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 03/29/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice job! This is a good look at Remus's character. The octave sees him alone and is rather sad, and the sestet shows him finding both friends and love and is hopeful. Good luck in the challenge! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your help with this poem, and thanks for the review!!! 8)

Determined to try by Hokey

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Challenge entry by Hokey of Slytherin
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 03/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: Determined to try

That is very cute! I see you are keeping the happy couple a secret. For some reason when I read it at lunch my thought was Snape and Lily; I think I must have read something else that had them in my mind, because now I think it's Neville and Ginny. Anyway, I think it is very well done, and the title ties to the eighth line very nicely. Good luck in the challenge! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Yay! You are right, Neville and Ginny are the ones I had in mind while writing this. =) I\'m happy you liked this, Gina! Thank you for the very kind review, it means a lot to me! *hugs*

Rescue Me by Eowyn89

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Is Snape truly a malicious character, or one that is misunderstood? Read his internal struggle over coming from the darkness into the light...


Hufflepuff House

The Character Sonnet Challenge
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 03/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: Struggle

Nice job! Your use of language really adds to the overall tone of the poem, particularly the rhymes you chose to complete each line. The end is great! Good luck in the challenge! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yes, I befriended my thesaurus when I wrote this sonnet...it is good to know that some of my AP English skills are rubbing off in my writing! Thanks again for a lovely review!

More Than a Shadow by Colores

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A Petrarchan sonnet describing Hermione's loneliness in her first year until she found her friends. User name on the Beta Boards is also Colores, and I am in Hufflepuff.
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 03/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice job! I like how you described Hermione in the first four lines, and then changed in the next four lines. The turn going into the sestet was very good. I love the line :"They would laugh and smile under the sun" I wonder if you couldn't rearrange things a bit to end with it? Another time maybe. =) Good luck in the challenge! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much! I am thrilled that you enjoyed it and your compliments are making me grin. =) Thanks for the advice; it would be difficult to change, but not impossible. Maybe next time! -Colores

Keeping Time by electronicquillster

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: In the aftermath of the final battle against evil, Ron is given the chance of a lifetime, a chance that has only been given to less than a dozen people throughout all history.

Pre-Deathly Hallows.
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 03/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice! The idea of the three Keepers of Time was very original, and I love the focus on Ron getting to change something. You picked a great moment for him to want to change; when he mentioned first year I thought it would be the chess game. But you tied his desire to change what he said about Hermione back to his declaration of love perfectly. I really enjoyed your story! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Yay! I\'m so glad you liked it. Thank you for your review. And for actually writing a review that\'s made me feel like my writing meant something. :)

Dobby's Afflictions by Cheshlin

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A sonnet that describes Dobby's point of view at the beginning of Chamber of Secrets.

This is for the Sonnet Challenge in the Poetry Anyone section of the Great Hall by Cheshlin in Slytherin House.
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 03/29/07 Title: Chapter 1: Dobby's Affliction

Great job! I love how different this is from most sonnets, focusing on a character given little attention in fanfiction. The poem fits Dobby perfectly! Good job with the rhymes and good luck in the challenge! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much Gina! I don\'t have a clue what lead to me thinking of Dobby, but it was fun to write about him. Cyns

What is One Picture Worth? by lucilla_pauie

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A honeymoon gone awry...A wedding portrait gone blotchy...

The honeymoon going awry led to the portrait going blotchy and the portrait going blotchy could lead to the honeymoon going very awry!

What's a witch to do except perhaps travel time, to save the portrait and the honeymoon?

Hermione meets the master of Time-turners, however, and gets much much more than she bargained for...

This is LucillaJoanna of Hufflepuff, traversing A Shift In Time in the Spring Challenges...

...and won Second Place!

Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 03/31/07 Title: Chapter 1: Temper and Time

Hi there! Nice start! You've done a great job setting up this story. I loved the beginning scenes with Ron and Hermione, and the way you separated them so Hermione could go on her adventure alone was well done though so sad. I was a bit confused when Hermione ran off to the Rashleigh estate; perhaps a sentence or two earlier in the story introducing the estate as being nearby where an eccentric man lived would help make that clearer. Also, how did Hermione *know* to go there for help with the portrait? That said, I loved what you did with his character! Having his time traveling selves pop up to visit was brilliant. His deal with Hermione was a great way to get her to the past. I look forward to seeing how you interweave Hermione with the story of his portrait; and I'm really hoping that after it's all said and done he will fix her own and her and Ron will make up! Like I said, great start - good luck with the challenge!!
~Gina :)

Author's Response: Hi Gina! Oh my, thank you for such honor of a review from the legendary Gmariam! *bashful smile* The Rashleigh estate and Rashleigh\'s being the Time-turner inventor is introduced when Hermione had just gone out into the moor. Afterward, she didn\'t *know* to go there for help, she didn\'t even know if he was still alive and residing there, but, true to Granger-impetuosity-when-desperate, she just...well, *went for it*. That said, thank you so much for the encouragement and the advice, Gina! And yes, I will have them make up. I don\'t write sad stories! *hint hint* ^_^

Envy by GryffindorGoddess

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Of the seven deadliest sins, Ron suffers greatest from envy.

Winner of the Character Petrarchan Sonnet Challenge!

Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 03/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: Envy

Fantastic job! This sonnet really showed Ron's character development wonderfully. The rhythm is excellent and I absolutely love how you concluded it with "The jealous beast has given way to trust." What a great line! I would only suggest seeing if you could sneak in another word for 'temper,' since it did pop up three times. =) Good luck in the challenge!! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Gina! I took your advice about the \"temper\" thing (I didn\'t realize how many times I had used that word...) and it *definitely* makes the poem more powerful. I really appreciate the constructive feedback, so again a HUGE thank you! You\'re a gem! :D ~GG