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Night by Elphin
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 22]

Summary: "He may well be the chosen one, but he is still my baby."

Lily and James Potter live every day fearing that the greatest dark wizard in the world will discover their secret. Knowing the threat that lies upon them, Lily reflects on how much it has affected their family.


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 1573 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/10/07 Updated: 09/23/07


Reviewer: MagEd Signed
Date: 09/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: Night

That was extremely well written, and had me nearly in tears. I love how you wrote Lily; I can easily picture her that way. Again, wonderful job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m glad she was realistic. :)

 

The Letter by Cassandras Cross
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 439]

Summary: Past Featured StoryDH SPOILERS! Harry is so consumed with his career as an Auror that he loses touch with Ginny and their children until a letter arrives to help him remember what really matters. But is something sinister waiting out there to take it all away? An escape from Azkaban, the first in twenty years, stirs up Harry's worst fears from the past as those he loves are threatened.

Romance, mystery, and drama combine to make this a story you won't soon forget! Set one year before DH epilogue. Completely canon compliant. All reviews receive responses.

THE EPILOGUE IS UP! I don't know whether to laugh or cry as this story comes to an end, and Harry finally figures out where it's really at. (Thanks again to the amazing mods for your rapid-fire response!)

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 76406 Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/21/07 Updated: 12/01/07


Reviewer: MagEd Signed
Date: 10/27/08 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

If I was a better person, I would have reviewed for each chapter as I read. Unfortunately, I was just too eager to keep reading! I'll try and make up for it by giving you a nice long review now. First and foremost, I have to say this is one of the best fanfictions I've read in a long, long time, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I don't read fanfiction as much as I used to, but I'm certainly glad that I saw this recommended over in the Hufflepuff forums and decided to give it a go.

You're characterizations of everyone are always spot on; I particularly liked the way you captured Ron and Hermione. I can imagine their house being a refuge for House Elves without trouble, and picturing it in my mind always makes me smile. I also loved Ron's affection for Rosie -- as crazy as Ron is, I'm sure he'd make an excellent father. (Oh, God, I've been so obsessed with Harry Potter for so long I talk about the characters like they're real people! Oh, well.)

I was also very impressed with the way you were able to intertwine a mystery that slowly unfolds and keeps readers on the edge of their seats with a plotline that centers on family, on Harry and Ginny's love for one another and their family. You definitely made their romance exactly as I pictured it. I agree that J.K. Rowing, much as I love her, ought to have put a little something more on Harry and Ginny SOMEWHERE in the seventh book, and this definitely helps make up for it. In my mind, this is canon.

While I'm spewing out this long review, I have to confess that I nearly started crying when Ted was in the Hospital and he and Harry were talking. I loved Remus and Tonks, and I think you managed to do them justice with your portrayal of Ted! The relationship he's formed with the Potters in this story is wonderful; it's no wonder I teared up!

In short, I have nothing but good things to say about this story. I usually like to offer constructive criticism, as I always appreciate it, but I really have nothing to add. This story is phenomenal as is. I didn't see any typos whatsoever, which never fails to impress me (on the rare occasion that it occurs!) Lastly, I have to say that I loved how it ended. Harry swinging Lily around and shouting "I'm Daddy!" in the train station is a perfect moment to picture, and definitely something Harry Potter, after his horrible childhood, deserves to be able to do! :)

Author's Response: Wow! I hardly know how to respond to such a glowing review. But you've definitely made up for a lack of quantity with quality. I hope you'll also read 'Great Expectations' which, though it takes place earlier chronologically, goes into greater depth and also provides the basis of future stories that I have planned. Thank you so very much. I am truly humbled and grateful.

 

A Different View On Love by helz_belz
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 364]

Summary: James would do anything to get inside Lily’s head. Lily would do anything to get away from James. Lily was brewing a banned potion. James went to find her. Lily made a mistake and the potion exploded. James got his wish, but is it much more than he bargained for?

Now Complete!



After a year the Epilouge is now up! Come read for a bit of fun!!

Runner up QSQ - Best Chaptered Canon Romance


Reason for Nomination:
This is the most unique take on how James and Lily really got to know each other. The story is hilarious and keeps you laughing throughout, but it never lets you forget the serious stuff. Plus, she somehow manages to end each chapter with a nice cliffhanger.

~~hestiajones

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 51560 Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/23/08 Updated: 04/08/11


Reviewer: MagEd Signed
Date: 06/25/09 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: Objection!

Excellent update! I've never read a Lily/James or Marauder fic that had anything remotely close to the "trails" you have the Marauders holding in this fic and I love it -- you're an extremely creative author, which is always a good thing! It seems very much like the Marauders to do that, and I love that Lily went ahead and sucked it up, streaking across the school as James. I really liked the conversation between Alice and James as well. There are many different ways of falling in love and I think you did a good jobs describing that. The ending was also very good; it was very touching. I think there's so much J.K. Rowling left untold about Sirius's story, so it's always interesting to me what authors come up with concerning it. I loved what you wrote here, and I loved how you lightened it up at the end with Sirius teasing Lily about her crying. Great job, and I look forward to another interesting update! I can't wait to see how you finally have Lily and James get together and how it all plays out :)

Author's Response: Firstly, sorry for taking so long to respond to your review. I used to be so diligent, but life sort of piled up for a while :)

Thanks for all your compliments, they really drove to the heart of what I was aiming for. The trials - I don't know when I thought of them. Originally, it was going to be all about loyalty, but the running naked just popped into my head! The Alice and James conversation, was never intended. In all honesty, when I planned this story, Alice was something very much like a Mary-Sue. But when I really started writing, she took on a life of her own and I wanted to show that to everyone. As for Sirius- that was in my original plan and I wrote it ages ago. Like you said, I think there is so much more to Sirius, just begging to be explored. As for the ending -- it's nearly here... Hopefully you like it :D

 
Reviewer: MagEd Signed
Date: 05/16/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: The Head's Dormitory

I rarely read multichaptered fanfiction anymore, simply because I have very little free time and I more often spend it working on my own stories or reading quick, one-shots. I saw this story recommended on a Lily/James livejournal group that I frequent and it seemed like such a fun idea that I couldn't resist trying it out. I am very, very glad I did. I wish I had been a good enough person to review with each chapter, but I was too desperate to get on to the next chapter. I'll try and make up for that now.

First and foremost, you write very well. You have very good grammar -- something that always bothers me when its poor -- and you have nearly no typos. Your writing also has a great flow to it as well as realism. I can imagine everything you describe happening. As appealing an idea as it is, I can imagine a story about a girl and a boy switching bodies being very hard to tackle. You did it so well, however. Poor James having to put up with PMSing! My brother only just learned that girls go through that every month. His response was, "Oh Maggie, I'm so sorry!" I think you described James's reaction to all of that perfectly.

I also love how you have James so sure of his love for Lily. I can't remember exactly which chapter it was, but when you had James thinking how their children better get his Quidditch skills, I was smiling. I also like how realistic you make his feelings for her, how you describe him trying not to like her and declaring that he's over her only to keep being drawn back in and unable to resist vocalizing his feelings every few months. It makes a lot more sense than stories that have him continuously after her.

Perhaps my favorite part of the story -- or at least a large reason why I like it so much -- is that you show Lily slowly falling in love with him. It's not at all sudden, but the reader can feel it building. I hate it when fanfictions -- and books, too -- just have characters immediately fall in love with one another. Perhaps its because I don't personally believe in love at first sight or maybe it's simply because its fun to read about how love comes to be, but I really do hate it when stories skip that. I like to read about Lily falling in love with James, and you write it perfectly in this story.

It was a real treat to read this, and I can't wait to read more. You haven't really left this chapter on a cliffhanger (something I can't help but always do in my stories), but I'm still dying for me. Great job. Thank you so much for sharing your ideas and your writing skill :)

Author's Response: *Stars at the screen*
*Blinks*
*Blinks again*
*Realises she is not breathing*
*Takes a breath before she passes out*

Sorry about that display, but before I go on, I must tell you how much I love your stories. (Honestly, go and check out my favourite authors list.) Looking back, I must say some of my reviews on your stories were quite fanatical, I have definitely improved my writing! You have been my favourite author since from when I first read 'When Darkness Did Surround Us' and I have emulated you in many aspects of how I write (Many cliff hangers, notes on where I am going next on my authors profile, sneak peaks ect.). So this review has been the highest of compliments to me because I look up to you as an author.
br> Many thanks must go to my Betas for your first comment. Also, recently I started reading the story to my sister and editing as I go. Its amazing what you pick up when you read out loud. Thanks for the complements though! James putting up with PMSing - it was quite fun to write. Boys are so clueless aren't they? The line "A whole week?" actually comes from one of my male friends, when I explained that it isn't just a quick once a month thing. It got me thinking how James would feel...

I'm glad you like the way I've portrayed James. James is often such a flat character in stories, where all he does is ask Lily around and mope. I wanted to show that he has tried to get over her, and that beneath he wants what is best for her, but continually gets drawn back. I think he has so much depth that people so rarely explore (hence why I love Someone to Watch Over Me).

I defiantly agree with you on the instant love thing. Why on earth would Lily suddenly change her mind for no reason? It takes time, and changed situations for old conceptions to break down. I'm glad you like it :)

Thanks so much for the review :) Honestly, it made my day.

 

Over and Over by ron lover
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Over and over, over and over I fall for you Over and over, over and over I try not to.

Lily is always trying to get away from James. He can never talk to her without getting yelled at or insulted. How much of this can he take before he is over her for good? James' POV



Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 1947 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/27/09 Updated: 07/29/09


Reviewer: MagEd Signed
Date: 08/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Over and Over

I read fanfiction rarely these days, busy as I am with real life and my own fanfiction, but I thought I'd give this one a chance. Lily and James shippers don't usually do dark/angst (that I've found, anyway) and the idea appealed to me. I'm glad I decided to try it out: it was very, very well done and worth the read!

I liked the way you wrote; it reminded me of Hemingway. It was also so very teenager, with little details that made all the difference. I liked the brief mention of him taking a vial of Sirius's potion, for example, or the way that he proclaims simply that his situation "sucks." He sounds like any other angsty teenager and I loved it, even though I'm a sucker for fluff.

One critisicm: the story switches from present tense to past tense a little ways in. Both would work for the story but consistancy would be helpful. I use to be dreadful about tense, so I'd be happy to look over and offer help on a sequel if you wanted. :)

One thing I really liked was the clear longing that you presented in James. Having a crush on someone, especially when you're his age, and having that crush unrequited is so hard. Every little word and touch and look means something and every rejection is the end of the world and you feel so inadequate every time you see the person you like happy without you. I liked how he also wanted her physically and wasn't a mopey romantic; no teenage boy wouldn't be thinking those things about the girl he fancied. The way he turns all his feelings into anger at the end was also fitting.

Overall, good job. Hopefully things will look up for poor James and Lily will realize what she's missing! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. As for the tenses, I have a total problem with them. I would love it if you looked over the sequel, but it's probably not what you're expecting. It's a chaptered fic and they aren't even together until the very end. It's not going to be a James/Lily story, so you don't have to if you don't want to. Thanks again for your review!

 
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